GRE英語考試作文點評:6分范文的構架
首先是ISSUE部分評分標準:從最高6到0分。
SCORING GUIDE FOR PRESENT YOUR PERSPECTIVE ON AN ISSUE
GRE ESSAY SCORING GUIDE: PERSPECTIVE ON AN ISSUE SCORE
6 A 6 paper presents a cogent, well-articulated analysis of the complexities of the issue and demonstrates mastery of the elements of effective writing.
滿分作文的標準:表現(xiàn)出對語言的把握(mastery),對題目的深刻理解(complexities),并且cogent。
A typical paper in this category
--develops a position(看到了嗎,a position,要選取一個角度)on the issue with insightful reasons and/or persuasive examples (看到OR了嗎,所以沒有例子也可以,如果你可以congent并且給出非常insightful的理由)
--sustains a well-focused, well-organized discussion(關于文章結構的要求)
--expresses ideas clearly and precisely
--uses language fluently, with varied sentence structure and effective vocabulary (關于語言的要求的,你對語言的mastery就應該從這幾個方面體現(xiàn)出來)
--demonstrates superior facility with the conventions (grammar, usage, and mechanics) of standard written English but may have minor flaws(這個minor flaws是建立在不影響理解的基礎之上。)
1--Topic: Generalists vs. Specialists
Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
"In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated. We need more generalists -- people who can provide broad perspectives."
SAMPLE-1 (score:6)
In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both positive and negative effects among persons in Western society call for a balance in which there are both specialists and generalists.
這一段非常干凈利索的引出來題目的theme: specialist and generalist這個就是general statement。一些朋友拿文章出來修改的時候我經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn)沒有一個引子,一個general statement。缺少這個部分的文章是得不到高分的.
Specialists ar