實用的學英語作文匯總七篇
在日復一日的學習、工作或生活中,大家都嘗試過寫作文吧,作文一定要做到主題集中,圍繞同一主題作深入闡述,切忌東拉西扯,主題渙散甚至無主題。你知道作文怎樣才能寫的好嗎?以下是小編為大家收集的學英語作文7篇,歡迎閱讀與收藏。
學英語作文 篇1
立意不鮮明
經(jīng)?匆姾⒆舆厡戇厰(shù)“一、二、三……”湊字數(shù)現(xiàn)象普遍,或者經(jīng)常問老師:“寫不出來,我能瞎編嗎?”有些孩子極度缺乏生活常識或生活經(jīng)歷、也沒經(jīng)典閱讀文學的滋養(yǎng),造成“下筆無言”,或者寫的東西單純?yōu)榱烁愎、好玩,沒有實質性內(nèi)容。
建議家長增加孩子的生活閱歷和原版閱讀,從而先做到“有語意、有觀點、有情緒”。
結構不完整
小學生作文容易結構缺失,常見寫著寫著,突然結束沒有結尾;或者沒有開頭,讓讀者莫名其妙…… 小學生作文通常邏輯混亂,思維跳躍,東一句、西一句,內(nèi)容不關聯(lián)。
建議先訓練“框架式寫作”,利用一些連接詞理清思路,如:First of all, For a start, In addition… 進而做出取舍,突出閃光點。對內(nèi)容進行取舍非常很有必要性的,避免文章冗長、論據(jù)雷同、突出文章的重點。建議訓練孩子加強整篇概念:Introduction, Body, Conclusion, 即中文所說的“總~分~總”,確保文章的.完整性。
中式思維
小學生作文表達中式思維過重:學生中文思維能力遠遠超出其英文表達能力,所以出現(xiàn)錯句、斷句等現(xiàn)象。不少孩子寫作文竟然變成了“中文翻英文”的過程,腦子里面構思的是中文作文,千方百計把它翻譯成英文而已。
建議要培養(yǎng)孩子長期原版閱讀習慣,積累詞匯和形成英文思維,從而縮短當中轉換環(huán)節(jié)。
基本功不過關
小學生作文單詞拼寫、語法錯誤眾多:三單錯誤,時態(tài)混亂等等,建議避開雷區(qū),扎實學好基本語法和句式,并養(yǎng)成檢查習慣,進而做到下筆無錯。
句式單一
小學生作文句式太單一:通篇一種到兩種句式,即使沒有錯誤,也很難歸類到一等作文行列。
如果孩子年齡小,就只會那兩種,如簡單靜態(tài)句或進行時,也建議控制好比例,適時轉換。
學英語作文 篇2
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancingNo, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要領點評】 這一篇寫愛好的文章,小作者的寫作思路很值得我們學習,他沒有具體寫到劉瑩的'某一種愛好,而是從學習到課余的多種愛好入手,對劉瑩的各種愛好進行了粗線條地勾畫.從“愛好”這個角度來看劉瑩的話,我們會覺得這個形象很飽滿。 小朋友們寫這種“敘事寫人”作文時,可以從兩個角度下手:一是具體地描繪;二是和上面小朋友一樣,粗線條地勾畫,二者各有所長,另處在行文中使用一些問句,使用一些轉述的話,可以使作文更有靈氣,避免了平鋪直敘的缺點。比如上文的“Does she like dancingNo, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不錯的句子,使讀者眼前為之一亮。
學英語作文 篇3
My father’s name is Wang han. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old. My father is a worker. He works in a factory.
我父親的名字是汪涵。他有一個英文名字,杰克。他38歲。我的父親是一個工人。他在一家工廠工作。
He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms.
他有兩個大眼睛和兩個大耳朵。他的頭發(fā)是短短的。我的父親是非常瘦。他只有50公斤。
He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn lots of English from the program at that channel.
他非常喜歡學習英語。他每天學英語。我爸爸喜歡看電視。他最喜歡的'電視頻道是CCTV-10,因為他可以從這個頻道的節(jié)目中學到很多英語。
English is my father’s good friend. I am my father’s friend, too.
英語是我父親的好朋友。我是我父親的朋友。
學英語作文 篇4
上學期我英語只考了68分,媽媽知道只有68分,“成績這么低,怎么辦,還不如去找個英語補習班。”“有!”“在哪里?”“是我們班的英語老師!庇谑俏夷贸隽擞⒄Z老師的電話號碼,打給了英語老師。
我果然去了老師家里,那里的人可多了,有十幾個人,擠都擠死了。星期一、星期三、星期五的.上午我們都要上學,在學習英語中,老師要我們認真的學習。
下課了,老師給我們一些零食吃。有火腿腸、咪咪、酒鬼牛肉……特別是肯德雞,同學們知道都高興地跳了起來。個個吃的津津有味,一陣陣香味撲鼻而來。后來,我又吃了兩個果凍,包裝袋里還有兩個小水槍,好開心呀!我拿著兩個小水槍灌滿了水,往同學臉上噴,他們也往我臉上噴,就這樣打成了一往。后來又上課了。
在老師家,我們都圍著大圓桌,就是這樣度過了一個暑假,明年暑假,我還要來這里。
學英語作文 篇5
Hi! Good friends. My name is susie. Im ten years old. This is my pet. Its a turtle. He is also ten years old. His name is sandwich. He eats ten small fishes every day .
Look at him! He has a beautiful shell and two small eyes. He also has a long tail.
Now my turtle wants to have a little sister. They can play, sleep and walk together. Now, mr sandwich, please reach out your hand and say bye-bye. My friends,please call me. My telephone number is one two three four five.
【參考翻譯】
您好!好朋友。我叫蘇西。我Y已經(jīng)十歲了。這是我的寵物。它是一只烏龜。他也是十來歲。他的名字是三明治。他每天得吃條個小魚。
看著他!他有一個漂亮的外殼和兩個小眼睛。他也有一條長長的尾巴。
現(xiàn)在我的烏龜想有一個小妹妹。他們可以玩,睡覺,一起走,F(xiàn)在,三明治先生,請伸出你的`手,說:再見。我的朋友們,請給我打電話。我的電話是一二三四五。
學英語作文 篇6
There are too many disabled people in the world. They have no differences from country to country. Some of them were disabled when they were born, the others were injured or hurt in all kinds of accidents, which made them disabled. Almost all of us feel sorry for them. We commiserate with them because they are another kind of people. But some disabled people refuse others’ commiseration. They think they can do everything by themselves. They don’t consider themselves as people who have defects. They think they are the same as normal people.
In fact, a great number of people with disabilities should be taken care of by others. They get help from the government or some beneficent organizations in society. But that’s not enough. They must look after themselves on their own. When a baby with disabilities is born, it should be taught to learn some particular skills to live. Or else, it would fail in the future. So one with disabilities must have abundant confidence to fit the hard life without others’ help.
學英語作文 篇7
Definitely Yao Ming! He is so great a basketball player. I never miss a single game of him. I love him because he plays basketball so well and most important of all, he is a Chinese. I am proud of him.
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